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The good ship Pakkuna spotted leaving the harbor, sailing away with Miri on deck!

-cough-

I love this page, though. It’s so powerful, especially since so many of us have been here at one point or another, as either Una or Pakku… I know that I’ve been both in my time.

Yar, thar be rocks in that harbor thar, good Cap’n Miri. Bes’ keep yer hand t’ th’ tiller!

This scene was not in the original script and I’m especially glad I revised everything because this is one of my favorite moments. It’s so critical to who Una is and what she’s wrestling with.

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